ラングリッチ195 添削

Cheryl先生
英作文添削

昨日終わらなかった部分の添削を依頼。

今日から5ヶ月目に入ったのだけど、予習復習の時間が十分に取れないのと来月のIELTSが育休中最後のチャンスなのでそっちに集中するため、1日1コマのリッチプランに変更。Basic、sutandard、発音のテキストレッスンが一通り全部終わったしね。

After the incident, I wanted to do something for the people in the area where the tsunami hit hard. victims of the tsunami especially in the regions where it damaged a lot of properties and claimed many lives.
My husband and I sent some goods like toilet papers, diapers and some goods for babies.
And we also donated money to the Red Cross.
Truth be told, I had never sent something like that to victims before the earthquake happened.
Since I'm really glad to receive kindness from other people, I am also trying to give that back to others.

On the other hand, I am convinced that it is necessary to be prepared such  in an emergency like that.
I suggest four things to do.
Here are some helpful tips:
1. Recognition
We should realize that disasters may happen anywhere and anytime. We should get rid of the delusion that only I will be safe.
2. Stock
We should buy enough necessities, such as water, foods, diapers, a flashlight, a radio, medicines, mittens, protections against the cold and so on.
3. Connection
We should have some tools to contact with relatives in addition to a mobile phone, such as e-mail, twitter or facebook.　*and/orどちらでも可
4. Consensus
We should decide on how what to do and where to go for each family, company and school.


-One of my bookshelves collapsed in spite of having been fixed.
-I gave birth safely on July and my baby is growing up healthily healthy.


・語句説明
bonnet　布製の帽子
evacuation plan　避難計画