レアジョブ67 Writing Task2

F先生

昨日の朝予約して繋がらなくて、夜予約してやっぱり繋がらなくて、どうも停電だったらしい。
ようやく今日繋がって受講できた。

先生から教えてもらったサイト。
Subordinate Conjection　接続詞や,カンマと;セミコロンの使い方について解説。
http://web.cn.edu/kwheeler/grammar_subordinate.html

今日のお題

In some the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
(CAUSE-SOLUTION ESSAY)

・theの用法

-ARTICLES-- THE+PROPER NOUN

the- emphasis

obesity- general topic àremove ‘the’

・intensifier強意詞

so, too--not good àdefinitely, extremely

・question: not good

・to weigh計る、量る、測る--to get the kilo

score:6.0

-task response: able answer the topic / Your idea is good.
-cohesion and coherence: effectively used
-lexical resources: try to improve
-grammatical range and accuracy: middle level / need to have more complex structure